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alone in a world by ~baf39:iconbaf39:



I'm alone,
alone in this world,
thinking, doing, nothing good.
he's dead.
he's all i had,
he died saving me...

1)
but all he did,
was put me in a greater danger...
death to a broken heart.

2)
but in the end...
im still in harms way...
dieing by a broken heart...
©2008-2009 ~baf39
:iconbaf39:

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thought of a better way to word

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:iconwolfsthorn:
Is this about somthing that happened? Or did you just make it up?
I love it!

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You know you have to click it.... >:[ CLICK IT! [link]

Thank you ~wolfofstorm for making my avatar!
:iconbaf39:
just made it up... and thx.

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ok i read this once, thought it was funny... 90% of teens today would die if Myspace had a system failure and was completely destroyed...read it again and thought it's most likely true. lol
:icondjmatthias:
Very dark and emotional...Nice job...

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"Its better to be ones self then to walk life's path as a hollow shell." -Myself
:iconsheepsterama:
Wow; it looks simple on the surface, but you don't grasp the depth until you read through it a couple times.
I really like this. ^_^ Thanks for sharing!

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Nankurunaisa
Everything will be alright. :heart:
:iconbaf39:
thank you.

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ok i read this once, thought it was funny... 90% of teens today would die if Myspace had a system failure and was completely destroyed...read it again and thought it's most likely true. lol
:icondjmatthias:
NP

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"Its better to be ones self then to walk life's path as a hollow shell." -Myself

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